WALT: give feedback to our buddy school about their metaphor poems.
Poem:
Nukuhou is a Orangutan
because he's funny and hairy.
Nukuhou is a rainbow
because he's majestic and colorful.
Nukuhou is Summer,
like a long hot holiday.
Nukuhou is Green Arrow,
sharp and accurate.
Nukuhou is a PS4,
always fun to play with.
Feedback:
For this poem I liked how Nukuhou compares him/her to a PS4, comparing the differences that he's is as fun to play with like a PS4. I also liked how he compares him/her to Green Arrow because he is sharp and accurate like Green Arrow.
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